Cold were his hands
Hands that hit me.
I lay still, motion-less.
Lest he hurt again
Devil, I saw, felt.
Angst, I felt within.
Begin, when did it?
Unending, it seemed now!
Scamper away, he said.
Everyday, once he finished!
Submitted for Acrostic Only
Posted by: psychedchick | March 26, 2010
Rocky Road...Once again 
i applaud u Raash, for u took a road less traveled. u went to the first person view.. and reading and visualizing, this scathed me. the effect was complete. kudos.
By: Leo on March 26, 2010
at 7:23 pm
Thank you. Thank you!
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:06 am
Touched
By: gaurav nanda on March 26, 2010
at 8:15 pm
🙂
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:06 am
lovely…superb!!!
By: SiD on March 26, 2010
at 8:42 pm
Thanks a lot!
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:06 am
you’ve well presented it as the helpless prey, bravo!
it’s just a very painful scenario for an innocent child, and you hit it right!
why it’s only now that I’ve met you here at AO?
By: Amity on March 27, 2010
at 5:03 am
Thanks 🙂
But now that you are here, hope to see you often 🙂
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:07 am
Very Good take, refreshingly different, on the prompt. Well done.
By: Saras on March 27, 2010
at 11:32 am
Thanks 🙂
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:08 am
I stand in front of u, bow down n give u an applaud…
the first person approach… the sketch of pain… and these lines
“Begin, when did it?
Unending, it seemed now!”
U r superb… kp up!!
By: Richa on March 27, 2010
at 11:42 am
Thanks, Richa!
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:08 am
awesome yaar
By: Freelancer on March 27, 2010
at 3:35 pm
Thanks, Fl!
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:09 am
dam u rash…it pinched so bad… so bloody bad…
By: shweta on March 27, 2010
at 4:21 pm
I am sorry?
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:09 am
I got busy and see what i missed 😦
This was a pure brilliance girl 🙂
Glad i m back in the blog hopping and writing to read masterpieces 🙂
Loved it 🙂
By: Scribbling Girl on March 27, 2010
at 7:28 pm
Thanks, SG 😛
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:10 am
Awesome 🙂
Missed your writings as i was hardly blogging
Glad i didnt miss this one
U trapped the point ….something which noone really wanna feel!
Great work
By: Scribbling Girl on March 27, 2010
at 7:32 pm
Very touched indeed!
By: Amias on March 29, 2010
at 5:02 am
Thanks, Amias 🙂
By: psychedchick on March 30, 2010
at 2:11 am