She looked at me
Perhaps to say something.
Eyes, hope within them?
Aspirations aplenty, lay crushed
Killed, dead, lost, shattered.
I wonder and shudder,
Now what to do?
Give her some space
Or return her faith?
Under the covers, hide?
Take the leap, instead!
Written for Acrostic Only
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thnk god…i would hve been dam angry if u hadnt posted it…
welcome back to acros…and i hope u r bck for good…
i liked this one
By: shwe on March 25, 2010
at 8:17 pm
Rashi the Genius gal thanks for helping me understand the art of Speaking out – the acrostic way… It took me some honest attempt to figure out the connection…
way to go gal…
By: cosmobong on March 25, 2010
at 10:57 pm
i never knew u wrote it also, usually u show me.
if u hadnt posted this, i’d have been angry too.
its really a slam bang return to AO and dont stop.
its like u r back home
well and strongly worded acrostic.
By: Leo on March 26, 2010
at 5:02 pm
Wow…this is a unique take on speaking out…:)
I am fellow AO writer, and this is my first time in your place, I find ur blog very good and interesting…:)
Have a nice weekend!
By: Amity on March 27, 2010
at 4:58 am
wow this was so different!
i so missed ur acrostics
now u better be back
so i get to read such beautiful works
By: Scribbling Girl on March 27, 2010
at 7:34 pm
Coming out or speaking out .. it’s all the same, you came back with a bang! Glad to find you again!
By: Amias on March 29, 2010
at 5:00 am